I read the comment below, and only then do I "attempt" to make artistic criticism. Even though I may understand what is being pointed out, my first judgment is based purely on feeling and emotion, as an art lover. I love it, just as it is, and would not change a thing. To me it brings out emotion.
Congratulations! this beautiful art work has been featured in our 2nd gallery show "The body as art" at #Art-Express 20th to 26th December 2010 Guest curated by *Ellyevans679 Please visit [link] and leave a comment. With best wishes for Christmas